My Dad's friend was important for me and my Dad.
He came from Ecuador.
He took care of my Father.
My Father took care of him.
He died by getting shot by bad guys.
My Dad and I cried like babies.
We were weak without him.
He was peaceful and my hero.
Erny
3 comments:
Erny, Your friend sounded like a great person. Have you ever been to Ecuador. I have not, but I would like to go this summer.
Ernny,
I was very touched by your story. I think that is beautiful that you can recongize the loyal friendship your dad shared with his friend. I also appreciate how you put emotion into your writing. You taught the other boys in the class that is okay to cry and admit when you are weak. I think you are a great example and leader. I think that you have a special hero. I hope you always remember the peaceful person he was. I wish he was still with you.
Ernny: Your words are very powerful! I hope that we all have heroes that make us feel peace. I hope that we can be heroes for someone, and that we can stand up and speak for those who don't or can't. You've helped to remind me how important that is. Thank you.
Melissa
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