Thursday, June 14, 2007

Making Clothes



Making Clothes brings me Peace
because while I am making clothes
I forget I have a mouth
and I don't talk.

Snip Snip Snip
Clothes are
Colorful
Fun
Fabulous

Do you know how to make clothes?

Mia

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

Dear mia, i do not know how to make clothes.can you teach me??????????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!!!????????????!!!!!!!!!!!!??????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

Katie DelaVaughn said...

Dear Mia,

I really liked how you expressed your interests through your writing and props for the photograph. I think the clothes you made for the photograph were very special. A lot of people try to be like other people but I think it is great that you like to be unique. I bet you are the only one that has cool clothes like that. I really like how you ended your writing with an interesting question. It is great that you know how to make wonderful things with your hands. I know that is peaceful for a lot of people. Your first paragraph makes me a little sad though. It is okay to talk. Ms. Katie loves to talk. Let's talk :) about why you wrote that sometime and we can talk about when the best times to talk in class are. Good work Mia!