Sunday, June 17, 2007

My Secret




My Secret

Shhhh
Shhhhhhhh
Shhhhhhhhhhh

The boy putting his finger on his lip

My heart told me a secret
It makes me shy
The peace I have is my secret
I can't tell anyone

1938-2007

Shhhhh
Shhhhhhh
Shhhhhhhhh


Julian

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

Dear julian, can you tell me the secret please!!!!!!! cause i can keep secret i mean if you even realy have a secret

Anonymous said...

what is your secret?

Why the do you say shhhh?

Anonymous said...

Julian, I think its great that you have a secret that brings you peace. Your picture is great too!

Katie DelaVaughn said...

Dear Julian,

You are so creative. I really love how you put so much emotion into this project. You are a very talented artist and writer. I think your idea for peace was unique and very inviting to the reader. Everyone is using the reading strategies we learned about in class and predicting your secret. You really made all the other readers think. I can't wait until you share your piece at our publishing party!