Thursday, June 14, 2007

My Puzzle




My Puzzle give me Peace
because my Mom's Dad give it to me
when he moved and he came up to see me.
I miss him because we can't know where he lives.
My Mom doesn't see him anymore.

Fatimah

4 comments:

Anonymous said...

DO YOU LIKE PUZZLES.

Anonymous said...

Fatimah, I like your puzzle. You must be really smart because it looks like you finished your puzzle in the picture.

Anonymous said...

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Katie DelaVaughn said...

Dear Fatimah,

Great work. Thank you for being patient with your picture. I loved how you chose to pose like a dove in your photograph. It is making a lot of your classmates think. I can't wait for you to explain your peace puzzle more to the class at our publishing party.