Thursday, June 14, 2007

My Granny



My Granny is like the sky
She's confident.
My Granny's like the roaring waters
My Granny is like me.
My Granny gives me Peace every day

Jaquon

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Jaquon, Your Granny sounds like a really great lady. I wish I could meet her some day.

Anonymous said...

DAER JAQUAN I LOVED WHAT YOU WROTE ABOUT YOUR GRANNY.I NOW YOU LOVE YOUR GRANNY BECAUSE I NOW YOU THINK YOUR GRANNY IS THE BEST.EVERY GRANDMOTHER IS THE BEST. LOVE JOANNE

Anonymous said...

dear jaqaun is your granny the same color as you.

Katie DelaVaughn said...

Dear Jaquon,

Your Granny is going to be so proud! I really liked meeting her this year. I can tell she really cares about you and takes great care of you. She will be very honored when you give her the picture and poem. I think you should ask her to frame it for you both to keep. I really like how you wrote the word water and how creative you wrote your poem. Way to think differently!

Anonymous said...

Dear Jaquan,
I LIKE THE WAY U CONNECTED TO YOUR gRANDMOTHER AND I CAN RELATE TO YOU BECAUSE MY GRANDMOTHER GIVES ME PEACE TOO.

U did great!